Orchid XP v8 wrote:
> OK, so I *think* I've taken nearly everybody's suggestions on-board.
> What do we think of this then?
>
> (The information about my degree is incomplete and possibly incorrect; I
> can't seem to find the transcript right now.)
>
> I've basically dumped in everything that seems remotely relevant.
> Presumably before I finalise this document I'll need to trim it back
> down again a little.
>
Much better.
Many people have further comments about what could be improved. Some I
agree with, some I don't. You decide.
However it is now at the stage where the major improvements have been made.
I'd be much more likely to interview somebody based on this version.
Your original I would have declined without even reading it all the way
through.
So, stage 2 - Get applying.
Cheers.
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