Orchid XP v8 wrote:
> OK, so I *think* I've taken nearly everybody's suggestions on-board. 
> What do we think of this then?
> 
> (The information about my degree is incomplete and possibly incorrect; I 
> can't seem to find the transcript right now.)
> 
> I've basically dumped in everything that seems remotely relevant. 
> Presumably before I finalise this document I'll need to trim it back 
> down again a little.
> 

Much better.

Many people have further comments about what could be improved.  Some I 
agree with, some I don't.  You decide.

However it is now at the stage where the major improvements have been made.

I'd be much more likely to interview somebody based on this version. 
Your original I would have declined without even reading it all the way 
through.

So, stage 2 - Get applying.

Cheers.

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