Darren New wrote:

> Personally, I'd leave "bright" in there. You'll have to decide. :-)

OK. Fair enough.

> "Learned Tcl/Tk in a week" is misspelled.

Damn. Now I have to figure out why it's misspelt...

> Instead of "(see next point)", I'd write "(including those described 
> next)".  This implies there are many you did, but the next ones are most 
> important.

Heh. You really do enjoy subtly implying that I'm more important than I 
really am, eh? ;-)

> I'm not sure I'd use the word "routine" in "routine recording of 
> changes". It sounds mundane. "Proactive recording of changes" perhaps, 
> or something like that. Something implying it's not just mundane, but 
> important to be consistent. "Consistent and proactive recording of all 
> changes in configuration and procedures."

How about "rigourous recording of changes"?

> Get rid of "(particularly backup and restore)". Seconded. :-)

It's gone.

> Year 1: "soft systems analysis and design"?  Did you mean "software 
> systems"?

"Soft systems" being opposite to "hard systems".

Hard systems are things with specific, typically scientific or 
mathematical requirements. E.g., programming the robotics for an 
assembly line would be a hard problem.

Soft systems are warm, fuzzy things that are ill-defined. The kind of 
thing where figuring out exactly what you're trying to do is usually the 
hard part.

> Overall, yes, much better. I'd hire that one. :-)

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