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Darren New wrote:
> Personally, I'd leave "bright" in there. You'll have to decide. :-)
OK. Fair enough.
> "Learned Tcl/Tk in a week" is misspelled.
Damn. Now I have to figure out why it's misspelt...
> Instead of "(see next point)", I'd write "(including those described
> next)". This implies there are many you did, but the next ones are most
> important.
Heh. You really do enjoy subtly implying that I'm more important than I
really am, eh? ;-)
> I'm not sure I'd use the word "routine" in "routine recording of
> changes". It sounds mundane. "Proactive recording of changes" perhaps,
> or something like that. Something implying it's not just mundane, but
> important to be consistent. "Consistent and proactive recording of all
> changes in configuration and procedures."
How about "rigourous recording of changes"?
> Get rid of "(particularly backup and restore)". Seconded. :-)
It's gone.
> Year 1: "soft systems analysis and design"? Did you mean "software
> systems"?
"Soft systems" being opposite to "hard systems".
Hard systems are things with specific, typically scientific or
mathematical requirements. E.g., programming the robotics for an
assembly line would be a hard problem.
Soft systems are warm, fuzzy things that are ill-defined. The kind of
thing where figuring out exactly what you're trying to do is usually the
hard part.
> Overall, yes, much better. I'd hire that one. :-)
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