On 21-Nov-08 14:52, Orchid XP v8 wrote:
> OK, so I *think* I've taken nearly everybody's suggestions on-board. 
> What do we think of this then?
> 
> (The information about my degree is incomplete and possibly incorrect; I 
> can't seem to find the transcript right now.)
> 
> I've basically dumped in everything that seems remotely relevant. 
> Presumably before I finalise this document I'll need to trim it back 
> down again a little.
> 
Better. I am still missing the games group you are in. At least I 
suppose that is a hobby of yours. Tcl/Tk is in point 5 but not in 3.
I don't like the 'expensive' terms. That is rather obvious and therefor 
unnecessary to stress. In fact weakens the point in my opinion.

I think it is correct to keep the p.o-t and invisible-me out of it at 
least until your posts about your current company are expired. Many 
employers may not be so glad to know how you talk about your current 
management.

If you would apply for a job more in my field then you may tell a bit 
more about what your company does. 'policy and procedure documents' are 
one thing, but for work in a medical lab you may be much more qualified 
than most.

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