> Comments? Suggestions for improvement?
Very nice. Good colors.
I would suggest making the media halos around the planets thinner.
Especially the closer one. atmosphere doesn't go that high off the planet so
it sort of looks weird to me.
Other minor suggestions/ideas:
- Maybe add a lot of really tiny asteroids in the asteroid ring; they're
all really big, I'd expect more debris.
- Work on the stars a little? they're all the same brightness and size, and
the density is uniform.
- Looks like the sun has a simple spherical density. Consider adding
cubic_wave to smooth out the edge a little more. (This may require
increasing the brightness to keep the same look.)
Cool image, though.
- Slime
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