stephen parkinson wrote:
> Nathan O'Brien wrote:
> 
>> An updated image with some of the changes suggested.
>>
>> Nathan O'Brien
>>
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> snow line is better, but too continuous, too smooth ???
> 
> maybe a touch of fog on rhs, skyline seems a fraction sharp
> 
> some of the boulders look they should roll downhill, they don't look
> embedded in the hillside
> 
> vast improvement though
> 
> stephen
> 
> 
> 

further to this

lake, the amount of white water seems out of preportion, maybe also the 
lake is too dark

stephen

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