> Everything looks a bit washed out...
I think this is due to the usage of Radiosity_Debug from rad_def.inc


> Also, the straw needs work. It appears to be composed of 
> perfectly straight pieces, all of the same length. 
Now guess what they are :)

> Some color variation 
> would be good too, as well as some irregularity in the shape of the 
> pile...maybe using a noise-based function to control straw density. This 
> looks more like straw...hay is greener and leafier, with smaller pieces:
I agree to all of them. Perhaps I'll go for straw, then, as I don't want 
to model leaves, too :)

> The stone floor and walls look nice, though a bit loose, like you could 
> just pull a block out.
Yeah, I'll add some soil/mortar and some details like grass in the gaps.

Thanks for your comments!
Florian

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