Corey wrote:
> There is only one small thing that bothers me about this pic and that is
the
> pencil. It looks too thick to me, and where is the eraser? I'd say replace
> it with either a better pencil model, or even better yet some mont blonc
> lookin' pen :) I agree with Shay, that the composition doens't quite look
> fit for a poster. I think I'd light it differently for a poster. You could
> put an tall lamp in the corner to fill the space and add more light near
the
> worldbowl which is the focus. I'd make the bowl look brighter and more
> saturated too so that it contrasts with the darker parts of the image.
>
> Also, if its gonna be a poster it might be cool to add more detail to the
> world in the wold bowl, like vegetation and maybe little huts or
something?
> Maybe even a lighthouse?
>
> Just some ideas, Its a great image to begin with though
>

About that pencil, yes, I'll likely add the pen from "2 Lonely" from my
latest IRTC-Entry, and perhaps even model that eraser. As I mentioned
somewhere, I've set myself to add lots of detail before putting it up on
Zazzle. And since it is obvious that there's a long way to go, that
Poster-Issue
will be covered somewhere on the way.
I was thinking about adding huts/lighthouse to the scenery, though I'm not
settled yet at what resolution this scenery is in...

About the lamp: The room has one main lamp on the ceiling, though its dimmed
a bit. Since its not a living room or any bigger room where one might want
to
spend a lot of time in chattering, another lamp would feel kinda awkward to
me,
especially at that spot, near the window...

But I'll keep those lighting-issues in mind, I think you're not too far off
there.

Regards,
Tim


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