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20 Nov 2024 10:39:36 EST (-0500)
  Re: WIP - Me329  
From: Daniel Matthews
Date: 10 Sep 2001 05:58:14
Message: <28592245.Xf39FnOYjC@3-e.net>
Impressive image!

Surface is a bit matt needs variance, particularly in oily areas.
Rivet detail to pronounced, just.
Rear gun looks to connected, needs darker seam on moving parts, vertical 
rotation. Same with wheel doors.
Exhaust pipes texture is all wrong, need to look like they get hot, make 
darker inside.
Numbers on tail, wrong font, too "clean"

Still, an very strong image.

(I come from a RAAF family of 3 generations, and my father restores war 
birds.)


Jozef Gatial wrote:

> Please your comments
> Jozef


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