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Stephen <mcavoysAT@aolDOTcom> wrote:
> > That would change the meaning.
> >
> > "Avoid A and B" means avoiding both A and B, but "avoid A in conjunction
> >with B" means avoiding them when done together, but doesn't necessarily
> >mean you should avoid them in separation.
>
> So it does.
>
> Sedulously eschew obfuscatory hyperverbosity likewise prolixity, either
> singularly or conjointly, espouse elucidation.
>
> Someone else can get rid of the "or" :)
You could chop out the whole 'either singularly or conjointly' I reckon. Or
maybe just replace it with 'preferably conjointly'? I think there should
probably be a semicolon in there somewhere, too.
:)
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