On 4/20/21 4:39 AM, jr wrote:
> "jr" <cre### [at] gmailcom> wrote:
>> "jr" <cre### [at] gmailcom> wrote:
>>> and now a snapshot of #3.  ...
>> another snapshot of #3.  ...
> 
> posting the last snapshot/wip version #3.  both the .inc and demo scene files
> are now in their final form, more or less.  the .html page needs a little more
> work; an example or two to add, and improving the writing.  to that end I'd be
> grateful for people highlighting errors, and suggesting better English where
> needed[*].
...
> 

Quickly on the html.


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...to avoid potential name clashes, own key names should be captialised...

should be:

...to avoid potential name clashes, your own key names should be 
captialised...


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A vote to avoid the 'otoh' acronym and write out the words.


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the '.Walk' examples showed...

Perhaps better as:

the '.Walk' examples show...


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At the very bottom of the html I see the word 'bool' ?


Bill P.

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