Hello, this it is my new attempt to create a realistic scene. It needs a
little (much :P) work on the textures, but I'm happy with the result.

I hope you like it!

As always, I need your comments to improve my job!

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"Alfonso Vicente Zurdo" <kba### [at] gmailcom> wrote:
> Hello, this it is my new attempt to create a realistic scene. It needs a
> little (much :P) work on the textures, but I'm happy with the result.
>
> I hope you like it!
>
> As always, I need your comments to improve my job!

Very nice start.

You need to dirty things up a bit otherwise it looks like a showroom.

Also, everything is perfectly placed. Things get bumped and moved when used,
especially smaller items.

The creases in the side of the bed are great. You need some in other places
too. Larger, gentler ones on top for example.

Good work.

Cheers
Eddie

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Looks nice, I especially like the mattress. Lighting is also good.
Some of your wood objects look like the have been unrealistically
cut out of a huge tree in one peace, notably the bed. Need some
carpenting there ;)

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"Alfonso Vicente Zurdo" <kba### [at] gmailcom> wrote:
> Hello, this it is my new attempt to create a realistic scene. It needs a
> little (much :P) work on the textures, but I'm happy with the result.
>
> I hope you like it!
>
> As always, I need your comments to improve my job!

   I think that I would use a wooden texture with a bit more definition in
the grain such as a cherry or perhaps a dark oak. This would provide a good
bit of contrast.
   The bed looks a bit flat and could possibly use just a touch of crand.

Technically the modeling looks very good.

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PovManiac nous apporta ses lumieres en ce 2007/09/08 17:01:
> "Alfonso Vicente Zurdo" <kba### [at] gmailcom> wrote:
>> Hello, this it is my new attempt to create a realistic scene. It needs a
>> little (much :P) work on the textures, but I'm happy with the result.
>>
>> I hope you like it!
>>
>> As always, I need your comments to improve my job!
> 
>    I think that I would use a wooden texture with a bit more definition in
> the grain such as a cherry or perhaps a dark oak. This would provide a good
> bit of contrast.
>    The bed looks a bit flat and could possibly use just a touch of crand.
> 
> Technically the modeling looks very good.
> 
> 
"crand" should be avoided whenever you can. Only use if you want to simulate 
concreete or sand, and even then, there are beter solutions.
Instead, using a normal with the same patern as the used pigment would be much 
more realistic.

-- 
Alain
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