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From: Kirk Andrews
Subject: "Invitation" WIP
Date: 10 Jun 2007 15:00:03
Message: <web.466c49824d242db7d1b1e8e80@news.povray.org>
This is an image I've been working on off and on for about a month.  I have
hopes to develope this into a much more complete image with more trees and
plant life inside the garden (and hopefully a waterfall), but I decided to
go ahead and post a WIP image.  I'd love to know what you think so far.

Disclaimer:  Yes, there is some slight post-processing in this image for the
lighting.


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From: Darren New
Subject: Re: "Invitation" WIP
Date: 10 Jun 2007 20:29:38
Message: <466c9772$1@news.povray.org>
Kirk Andrews wrote:
> This is an image I've been working on off and on for about a month. 

Nice. Looks more like a "Keep Out" than an invitation to me, tho. :-)

The glare, while possibly realistic, seems to detract from the image.

-- 
   Darren New / San Diego, CA, USA (PST)
     His kernel fu is strong.
     He studied at the Shao Linux Temple.


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From: Mike Sobers
Subject: Re: "Invitation" WIP
Date: 10 Jun 2007 20:50:01
Message: <web.466c9baeab7f840b57033b2e0@news.povray.org>
Darren New <dne### [at] sanrrcom> wrote:
> Kirk Andrews wrote:
> > This is an image I've been working on off and on for about a month.
>
> Nice. Looks more like a "Keep Out" than an invitation to me, tho. :-)
>

I agree - leave the gate slightly open for an "invitation" feel.  Looks
great otherwise.

Mike S.


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From: Florian Brucker
Subject: Re: "Invitation" WIP
Date: 11 Jun 2007 01:52:53
Message: <466ce335$1@news.povray.org>
Uh, looks like a lot of potential for a very nice image! As the others
said, opening the door a bit would make the invitation part clearer.
Something like entering a secret/magic garden perhaps? And although you
probably want to use the light to focus on the garden I'd recommend to
make the outside a bit brighter, too -- it's hard to see anything in the
foreground.


Regards,
Florian


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From: Kirk Andrews
Subject: Re: "Invitation" WIP
Date: 11 Jun 2007 12:00:02
Message: <web.466d705cab7f840bd1b1e8e80@news.povray.org>
Yes, I should have mentioned that I certainly planned on having the gate
open in the final image.

I think my main frustration right now is with trying to get decent enough
looking trees.  I've tried POVTree, NgPlant, and even my own tree macro and
I can't seem to get anything I like.  Does anybody have some tips on getting
some quality looking trees?


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From: Art Flint
Subject: Re: "Invitation" WIP
Date: 11 Jun 2007 15:38:46
Message: <466da4c6$1@news.povray.org>
I know, I have been playing Lord of the Rings Online, but that style is 
what I see here.
This is a very nice render.


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From: dlm
Subject: Re: "Invitation" WIP
Date: 11 Jun 2007 22:23:54
Message: <466e03ba$1@news.povray.org>
"Kirk Andrews" <kir### [at] hotmailcom> wrote in message 
news:web.466d705cab7f840bd1b1e8e80@news.povray.org...
> Yes, I should have mentioned that I certainly planned on having the gate
> open in the final image.

I'm not so sure about opening that gate!
You have the wonderful symmetrical wrought-iron tree, with the suggestion of 
the invitation behind it.
The hint of oasis behind the gate is what will be so inviting - if not 
accessible.

DLM


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From: Paolo Gibellini
Subject: Re: "Invitation" WIP
Date: 13 Jun 2007 05:33:28
Message: <466fb9e8@news.povray.org>
It is fascinating...
Paolo

> "Kirk Andrews" <kir### [at] hotmailcom> wrote:
> This is an image I've been working on off and on for about a month.  I
have
> hopes to develope this into a much more complete image with more trees and
> plant life inside the garden (and hopefully a waterfall), but I decided to
> go ahead and post a WIP image.  I'd love to know what you think so far.
>
> Disclaimer:  Yes, there is some slight post-processing in this image for
the
> lighting.
>
>


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