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From: Joanne Simpson
Subject: bush camp #1 (WIP)
Date: 12 Feb 2006 01:10:01
Message: <web.43eed000123d1c0993313ecc0@news.povray.org>
still evolving - now mostly happy with this image, except it needs more
interest in the foreground, and I am still rendering with low AA and quick
radiosity settings while I get the scene right.


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From: Jim Charter
Subject: Re: bush camp #1 (WIP)
Date: 12 Feb 2006 02:26:47
Message: <43eee337$1@news.povray.org>
Joanne Simpson wrote:
> still evolving - now mostly happy with this image, except it needs more
> interest in the foreground, and I am still rendering with low AA and quick
> radiosity settings while I get the scene right.
> 
> 
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> 
Great level of detail.  Spooky lighting, almost like a "Close 
Encounters" type scene.


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From: Thomas de Groot
Subject: Re: bush camp #1 (WIP)
Date: 12 Feb 2006 02:51:01
Message: <43eee8e5@news.povray.org>
"Joanne Simpson" <cor### [at] onewhiteravencom> schreef in bericht
news:web.43eed000123d1c0993313ecc0@news.povray.org...
> still evolving - now mostly happy with this image, except it needs more
> interest in the foreground, and I am still rendering with low AA and quick
> radiosity settings while I get the scene right.
>
Wow! This is a strong image!

Stormy weather expected?

Thomas


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From: Smws
Subject: Re: bush camp #1 (WIP)
Date: 12 Feb 2006 03:05:01
Message: <web.43eeeb4cf54700aad697eb700@news.povray.org>
"Joanne Simpson" <cor### [at] onewhiteravencom> wrote:
> still evolving - now mostly happy with this image, except it needs more
> interest in the foreground, and I am still rendering with low AA and quick
> radiosity settings while I get the scene right.

Wow, it's looking very good. I especially like the water, which has good
depth and good reflection. You also managed to make the building look
irregular- not all that easy with any cg structure.

Good work!

-Stefan Sittler


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From: Orchid XP v2
Subject: Re: bush camp #1 (WIP)
Date: 12 Feb 2006 06:02:17
Message: <43ef15b9@news.povray.org>
Looking good so far. I really like the lighting on the wooden building.


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From: Rene Bui
Subject: Re: bush camp #1 (WIP)
Date: 12 Feb 2006 06:55:00
Message: <web.43ef2171f54700aa61063ffe0@news.povray.org>
"Joanne Simpson" <cor### [at] onewhiteravencom> wrote:
> still evolving - now mostly happy with this image, except it needs more
> interest in the foreground, and I am still rendering with low AA and quick
> radiosity settings while I get the scene right.


Congrats Joanne! point of view and lighting are very good, don't know why
but for sure it comes from south hemisphere (sun position+eucalyptus
grove?)


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From: Paolo Gibellini
Subject: Re: bush camp #1 (WIP)
Date: 13 Feb 2006 04:32:44
Message: <43f0523c$1@news.povray.org>
I find it peaceful.
Some stars?
;-)
Paolo
> "Joanne Simpson" wrote
> still evolving - now mostly happy with this image, except it needs more
> interest in the foreground, and I am still rendering with low AA and quick
> radiosity settings while I get the scene right.
>


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From: Sebastian H 
Subject: Re: bush camp #1 (WIP)
Date: 13 Feb 2006 07:34:20
Message: <43f07ccc$1@news.povray.org>
Paolo Gibellini wrote:
> I find it peaceful.
Yes, really.

> Some stars?
At first I wanted to congratulate for the great star sky but
then I realised that it's actually my monitor which is covered
with heavy dust reflecting in the sun...


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From: POVMAN
Subject: Re: bush camp #1 (WIP)
Date: 13 Feb 2006 08:16:06
Message: <43f08696@news.povray.org>
Very Nice, better than I've ever managed.

Thoughts (Picky Points).

the shadow on the building seems to be coming from a couple of individual 
leaves as opposed to whole trees, might be worth moving the light source 
further away.

the broken board on the front of the building is a really cool touch.  I'd 
suggest adding the same type of character to the hand-rail, perhaps a bit of 
sagging.

I think the posts supporting the walkway are a little too clean, you need to 
add some grubbyness.

The plants at the waters edge are well placed but they seem a little 
uniform.  Might be worth adding some reeds or tall grasses in amoungst them 
to break up the sameness.

the leaves on the trees above the flat roof look a little artificially 
coloured, is there an ambient setting there that needs to be zeroed out?

the bases of the trees on the right look cut-off.

Excellent water! Love the idea of seeing throught the building!

I'd like to see a bigger version.


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From: Kenneth
Subject: Re: bush camp #1 (WIP)
Date: 15 Feb 2006 03:25:00
Message: <web.43f2e4e9f54700aaac3d99330@news.povray.org>
The low sun angle and mottled shadows on the building are VERY nice
additions to your scene. A beauty.

Ken


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