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From: Joanne Simpson
Subject: Bush Camp #1 (WIP) (500K)
Date: 20 Jan 2006 06:00:00
Message: <web.43d0c20cbd6f3f1b827af7510@news.povray.org>
Think of happy times bushwalking, as you wearily walk out of the forest and
discover your home for the night...
A follow-on from a post of a few weeks ago. The heron is similar, as is the
idea, but everything else is different.


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From: Kenneth
Subject: Re: Bush Camp #1 (WIP) (500K)
Date: 20 Jan 2006 08:55:00
Message: <web.43d0ead847f2b5e753335de0@news.povray.org>
There's so much to like and appreciate in this image. Peaceful tranquility.
Shows lots of work. The water and its rocks are really quite nice.

The heron looks like it has too few triangles(?)  Is it a bicubic_patch
model? If so, you might want to increase the patches' u_steps and v_steps,
to make it smoother.

Ken


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From: Thomas de Groot
Subject: Re: Bush Camp #1 (WIP) (500K)
Date: 20 Jan 2006 10:56:47
Message: <43d1083f@news.povray.org>
"Joanne Simpson" <cor### [at] onewhiteravencom> schreef in bericht
news:web.43d0c20cbd6f3f1b827af7510@news.povray.org...
> Think of happy times bushwalking, as you wearily walk out of the forest
and
> discover your home for the night...
> A follow-on from a post of a few weeks ago. The heron is similar, as is
the
> idea, but everything else is different.
>
I like this scene tremendously.

So, I hate to make a few (small) comments, but why else post, if there are
no comments? :-)

I think the lava-like ground looks strange, and I would expect that on
Hawaii, not in the Autralian bush, or am I horribly mistaken? Why not use
some really well-weathered, lateritic (red) soil or sandstone texture?

Good work on the plants and reeds. They may need a little bit more
randomness around the y-axis, or suggest some breeze, but then have them
bend more or less in one general direction.

Kenneth already mentionned the heron. The model is excellent, but the
ruffled feathers are difficult to get right, I guess.

I like the hut and the wood texture.

Overall, great image! Waiting for more!!

Thomas


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From: Charles C
Subject: Re: Bush Camp #1 (WIP) (500K)
Date: 20 Jan 2006 12:50:00
Message: <web.43d1219847f2b5e7c81152030@news.povray.org>
Wow! I like this... It looks very peaceful.  I want to eat a picnic there.
(Maybe  I'm a bit hungry so my stomach had to add it's comment too) How was
the house constructed? Which modeling program or is it CSG?
Charles


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From: fls13
Subject: Re: Bush Camp #1 (WIP) (500K)
Date: 20 Jan 2006 13:10:00
Message: <web.43d126fc47f2b5e77ce473a90@news.povray.org>
Fantastic pic!


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From: St 
Subject: Re: Bush Camp #1 (WIP) (500K)
Date: 20 Jan 2006 13:35:55
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"Joanne Simpson" <cor### [at] onewhiteravencom> wrote in message 
news:web.43d0c20cbd6f3f1b827af7510@news.povray.org...
> Think of happy times bushwalking, as you wearily walk out of the forest 
> and
> discover your home for the night...
> A follow-on from a post of a few weeks ago. The heron is similar, as is 
> the
> idea, but everything else is different.
>
   Excellent Joanne! Like Charles has said, I too would like to picnic 
there, but more than that, I would like to live there. My type of place, and 
in fact, I lived in a place very similar to that (the environment), when I 
was a nipper. (Sigh, it got burned down - long story). :/

    Good composition, nice pov. Heron could do with a little more work, but 
good so far.

      ~Steve~


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From: Darren New
Subject: Re: Bush Camp #1 (WIP) (500K)
Date: 20 Jan 2006 14:15:36
Message: <43d136d8$1@news.povray.org>
My first thought was "I would have thought Camp Davis would be better 
upkept."  Then I realized... wrong kind of Bush. :-)

-- 
   Darren New / San Diego, CA, USA (PST)
    Luke, the Force is a powerful ally,
    second only to The QuickSave.


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From: Jim Charter
Subject: Re: Bush Camp #1 (WIP) (500K)
Date: 20 Jan 2006 14:19:12
Message: <43d137b0$1@news.povray.org>
Joanne Simpson wrote:
> Think of happy times bushwalking, as you wearily walk out of the forest and
> discover your home for the night...
> A follow-on from a post of a few weeks ago. The heron is similar, as is the
> idea, but everything else is different.
> 
> 
> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
> 
Impressive detail and complexity.  The grass and reeds are particularly 
good and add much of the realism.  I would be intereseted in how you got 
the wavy look to the tall grass.


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From: Marc Jacquier
Subject: Re: Bush Camp #1 (WIP) (500K)
Date: 20 Jan 2006 15:16:32
Message: <43d14520@news.povray.org>

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> My first thought was "I would have thought Camp Davis would be better
> upkept."  Then I realized... wrong kind of Bush. :-)
>
LOL


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From: Marc Jacquier
Subject: Re: Bush Camp #1 (WIP) (500K)
Date: 20 Jan 2006 15:21:47
Message: <43d1465b$1@news.povray.org>

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> Think of happy times bushwalking, as you wearily walk out of the forest
and
> discover your home for the night...
> A follow-on from a post of a few weeks ago. The heron is similar, as is
the
> idea, but everything else is different.

Excellent scene!
I agree with Thomas comment about the lava.
I must add my 2 cents : the relatively sharp shadows make think of a bright
sun but the light is faint. I'd multiply sun rgb value by 1.5 or more.

Marc


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