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Hey guys,
What might be your suggestions with this image?
~Steve~
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St. <4387b689@news.povray.org> Saturday 26 of November 2005 02:13
> What might be your suggestions with this image?
This is in Pov? Very neat :)
Only, IMHO, the neck/head is wrong - it look like a snake
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>What might be your suggestions with this image?
With the speed (s)he is running, there should probably be some motion
blur on the legs/feet and maybe the tail. You could possibly reduce
the motion blur in the background just a bit.
Looks nice so far.
How was the cat created? Is it a mesh or (*gulp*) CSG?
Kyle
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"Raf256" <spa### [at] raf256 cominvalid> wrote in message
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> St. <4387b689@news.povray.org> Saturday 26 of November 2005 02:13
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>> What might be your suggestions with this image?
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> This is in Pov? Very neat :)
Thanks.
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> Only, IMHO, the neck/head is wrong - it look like a snake
The 'face' of the head is wrong, (which I know about), but the neck is
right, and I don't see any snake there. ;)
~Steve~
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"Kyle" <hob### [at] gatenet> wrote in message
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> >What might be your suggestions with this image?
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> With the speed (s)he is running,
Yeah, good thought about the gender. From my reference image I would
say that it's a male cheetah, but I guess it's hard to convey this in a CG
image.
there should probably be some motion
> blur on the legs/feet and maybe the tail.
Now that's a good idea, thanks. I'll have a play.
You could possibly reduce
> the motion blur in the background just a bit.
Well, I'm trying to capture one of those high-speed camera images that
you often see on TV. The background is a played-around with image-map.
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> Looks nice so far.
Thank you. :)
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> How was the cat created? Is it a mesh or (*gulp*) CSG?
I *wish* I could do this in CSG, but I would be posting it in 2008(?)
instead of 2005. It's a wings model.
Thanks for your suggestions.
~Steve~
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> Kyle
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"St." <dot### [at] dotcom> wrote:
> "Kyle" <hob### [at] gatenet> wrote in message
> news:v4ufo153sa7otqhf44iu0gvlt64lm8cs0a@4ax.com...
> > >What might be your suggestions with this image?
> >
> > With the speed (s)he is running,
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>
> Yeah, good thought about the gender. From my reference image I would
> say that it's a male cheetah, but I guess it's hard to convey this in a CG
> image.
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>
> there should probably be some motion
> > blur on the legs/feet and maybe the tail.
>
> Now that's a good idea, thanks. I'll have a play.
>
> You could possibly reduce
> > the motion blur in the background just a bit.
>
> Well, I'm trying to capture one of those high-speed camera images that
> you often see on TV. The background is a played-around with image-map.
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> >
> > Looks nice so far.
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> Thank you. :)
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> >
> > How was the cat created? Is it a mesh or (*gulp*) CSG?
>
> I *wish* I could do this in CSG, but I would be posting it in 2008(?)
> instead of 2005. It's a wings model.
>
> Thanks for your suggestions.
>
> ~Steve~
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> >
> >
> > Kyle
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i always seem to see white on the paws for cheetahs, might just be
seeing too many cats (house) though
re: the snake comment, head looks 30% small maybe
thought it was a photo, with a woo(sp) very soon after
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Hehehe... compare here:
http://www.bergoiata.org/fe/felins/High%20Velocity,%20Cheetah.jpg
If I didn't know any better, I'd say I just found your reference image. ;-)
[I notice that it looks like it's been edited somehow...]
See here:
http://www.bergoiata.org/fe/felins/Afterthoughts,%20Cheetah.jpg
The cheetah does indeed have a supprisingly thick neck and oddly small head.
Your texturing needs work. (Currently looks like an old sofa.) But the
modelling is quite good. I'd say the elbow on the furthest front leg
looks too rounded. There should also probably be slightly more of a
discontinuity in the spine at the shoulders and hips. Otherwise, not a
bad model!
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St. <438828ab@news.povray.org> Saturday 26 of November 2005 10:12
>> Only, IMHO, the neck/head is wrong - it look like a snake
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> The 'face' of the head is wrong, (which I know about), but the neck
> is
> right, and I don't see any snake there. ;)
I ment: the neck is so big and thick that it is even bigger or equal to
head, same as in snake ;)
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"St." <dot### [at] dotcom> wrote in message news:4387b689@news.povray.org...
> Hey guys,
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> What might be your suggestions with this image?
I assume this is meant to be a cheetah - the fastest animal in the world?
If so:
color scheme - not mottled black/red on green! (black on tan/cream)
See ref pic e.g. http://www.cathouse-fcc.org/gifs-jpegs/zulurun.jpg
face is striped not spotted
ear location?
bring the extremities into frame
The posing is nice and certainly evokes the feeling of speed with the
blurred background pan effect.
DLM
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Thanks all, for your comments. Very helpful. I think I've improved it a
little.
~Steve~
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