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From: Thibaut Jonckheere
Subject: Free ! (120k)
Date: 2 Jun 2005 04:34:48
Message: <429ec4a8@news.povray.org>
Hello to all.

This is my latest picture, called "free !". Mannequins from Poser, the 
rest is Pov CSG (a few objects are Wings-made).

Comments and critics are of course welcome.

Thibaut

PS : This is my first post to the newsgroup... I am still looking for a 
good idea of RSOCP, but wow that's difficult !


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From: Marneus Calgar
Subject: Re: Free ! (120k)
Date: 2 Jun 2005 04:41:34
Message: <429ec63e$1@news.povray.org>
Nice, the idea reminds me Matrix (or I-robot) !!

-- 
Dark Skull Software
http://www.darkskull.net

A+


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From: Renderdog
Subject: Re: Free ! (120k)
Date: 2 Jun 2005 05:25:00
Message: <web.429ecfbb498fd0ecae1e8520@news.povray.org>
Thibaut Jonckheere <tua### [at] yahoofr> wrote:
> Comments and critics are of course welcome.

Great concept, well done; nice atmosphere.

> PS : This is my first post to the newsgroup... I am still looking for a
> good idea of RSOCP, but wow that's difficult !

You could give him a reflective spherical head and make the
floor checkered tile :-)


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From: triple r
Subject: Re: Free ! (120k)
Date: 3 Jun 2005 09:50:01
Message: <web.42a05ff2498fd0ee702b90a0@news.povray.org>
Thibaut Jonckheere <tua### [at] yahoofr> wrote:
> Hello to all.
>
> This is my latest picture, called "free !". Mannequins from Poser, the
> rest is Pov CSG (a few objects are Wings-made).
>
> Comments and critics are of course welcome.

Great work.  Very nice atmosphere.  A couple suggestions:  He's free... and
walking casually toward the door.  I would either give him a nice sprinting
pose or better, crouched down in an athletic pose looking at the cage,
contemplating what just happened, wondering what to do next.  Also, maybe a
little more emphasis on the door - brighter light through the door, dimmer
light in the room - if only to tease them in their cages.  Maybe a couple
more objects to show the sense of human scale.  It felt like the room was
twenty feet high at first.  All of that said, great scene and hope to see
more.

 - ricky


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