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From: =Bob=
Subject: Dusk II
Date: 5 Nov 2004 12:37:27
Message: <418bba57$1@news.povray.org>
Thanks for the feedback on the previous version. Here's the
update (304k): http://sdg.ag.uidaho.edu/Images/Dusk02.jpg

Comments and suggestions always welcome!
=Bob=


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From: Roberto Amorim
Subject: Re: Dusk II
Date: 5 Nov 2004 13:09:41
Message: <418bc1e5@news.povray.org>
> Comments and suggestions always welcome!

Whoa. Fantastic. Are you aiming for photorealism? Because now it has a
cartoon/painting "feeling" that's very nice, IMHO...

Cheers.


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From: Slime
Subject: Re: Dusk II
Date: 5 Nov 2004 13:30:21
Message: <418bc6bd$1@news.povray.org>
> Comments and suggestions always welcome!

Great colors in the clouds. Two suggestions for the clouds: soften the edges
(probably by modifying a color map) and add a little turbulence. They look a
little too smooth and bumpy.

 - Slime
 [ http://www.slimeland.com/ ]


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From: Rune
Subject: Re: Dusk II
Date: 5 Nov 2004 14:11:27
Message: <418bd05f$1@news.povray.org>
=Bob= wrote:
> Thanks for the feedback on the previous version. Here's the
> update (304k): http://sdg.ag.uidaho.edu/Images/Dusk02.jpg
>
> Comments and suggestions always welcome!
> =Bob=

I can't help but feel that I'd intensify the mood of the image if the moon 
was a lot bigger - say 5 times bigger in diameter. You've probably made the 
moon have a realistic size in accordance with the camera angle, but if you 
don't mind artistic freedom, it might be worth trying out.

Anyway, great image. :)

Rune
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From: stm31415
Subject: Re: Dusk II
Date: 5 Nov 2004 17:25:01
Message: <web.418bfcf391fa5ebadf706a580@news.povray.org>
Yeah, I've never found a moon of realistic size to look right... even in
photos, it just looks too small. Would also crank up the ambient of the
moon, to give it that slightly flatter feel. I did a moon at some point
that I'm happy with. If I find it, I'll post it, but it might be to
earth-like for your image.

Great image though. A nice idea, and you pulled it off gracefully, no
over-emphasis.

-S
5TF!


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From: Eli
Subject: Re: Dusk II
Date: 5 Nov 2004 18:25:05
Message: <418c0bd1$1@news.povray.org>
If the clouds are lighted by sunlight, the moon can never be full at that 
position. Ever seen a full moon during the day?


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From: Jim Charter
Subject: Re: Dusk II
Date: 6 Nov 2004 08:13:10
Message: <418ccde6$1@news.povray.org>
=Bob= wrote:

> Thanks for the feedback on the previous version. Here's the
> update (304k): http://sdg.ag.uidaho.edu/Images/Dusk02.jpg
> 
> Comments and suggestions always welcome!
> =Bob=
> 
> 
Beautiful picture, suggests a mystic experience of nature.


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From: Rene Bui
Subject: Re: Dusk II
Date: 6 Nov 2004 10:55:00
Message: <web.418cf32b91fa5ebad8d512910@news.povray.org>
> Comments and suggestions always welcome!

Great ! and very STRANGE (;-o) because I took a photo of my garden in
january 2003 and it is very similar !

Good work anyway.

Rene
(the old newbie)


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From: =Bob=
Subject: Re: Dusk II
Date: 6 Nov 2004 12:40:50
Message: <418d0ca2$1@news.povray.org>
"Roberto Amorim" <wol### [at] hotmailcom> wrote in message
news:418bc1e5@news.povray.org...
: > Comments and suggestions always welcome!
: Whoa. Fantastic.

Thanks!

: Are you aiming for photorealism? Because now it has a
: cartoon/painting "feeling" that's very nice, IMHO...

Just trying to make it look appealing. Glad you
like it. =Bob=


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From: =Bob=
Subject: Re: Dusk II
Date: 6 Nov 2004 12:41:33
Message: <418d0ccd$1@news.povray.org>
"Slime" <fak### [at] emailaddress> wrote in message news:418bc6bd$1@news.povray.org...
: > Comments and suggestions always welcome!
:
: Great colors in the clouds. Two suggestions for the clouds: soften the edges
: (probably by modifying a color map) and add a little turbulence. They look a
: little too smooth and bumpy.

Thanks, I will try your suggestions.
=Bob=


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