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From: =Bob=
Subject: Fortress-Old stuff, revisted (311k before upload)
Date: 11 Nov 2002 23:04:52
Message: <3dd07de4@news.povray.org>
This is a still I was working on for the IRTC back
in March 2001, but I got too busy with other things.
I started working on it again in the last couple of
weeks, I'd sure appreciate any comments or
suggestions.

MegaPOV 0.7
Render time: 17hrs 23 min (1280x1024)
PIII 450, 512Mb ram.
PSP 6 to reduce and convert to jpg

Have a good evening...
=Bob=


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From: Thomas Lake
Subject: Re: Fortress-Old stuff, revisted (311k before upload)
Date: 12 Nov 2002 03:25:09
Message: <3dd0bae5@news.povray.org>
> This is a still I was working on for the IRTC back
> in March 2001, but I got too busy with other things.
> I started working on it again in the last couple of
> weeks, I'd sure appreciate any comments or
> suggestions.

Nice scene. I especially like the bricks what are they isos? CSG? The only
suggestion I have is change the tree at the top of the picture, it's very
hard to see the trunk so it kinda looks like its floating in the air, either
reposition it, change the colour of the bark, or light it differently so the
trunk becomes more visible.


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From: JPGargoyle
Subject: Re: Fortress-Old stuff, revisted (311k before upload)
Date: 12 Nov 2002 07:20:03
Message: <web.3dd0f19047945e90641f1e9f0@news.povray.org>
=Bob= wrote:
>This is a still I was working on for the IRTC back
>in March 2001, but I got too busy with other things.
>I started working on it again in the last couple of
>weeks, I'd sure appreciate any comments or
>suggestions.

Nice pic.
But I think there are some proportions that aren't right.
The pump looks too small in relation to the bricks.
My suggestion would be to use more bricks to make the well so that their
size is smaller.


Best regards.


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From: =Bob=
Subject: Re: Fortress-Old stuff, revisted (311k before upload)
Date: 12 Nov 2002 11:31:12
Message: <3dd12cd0@news.povray.org>
"Thomas Lake" <smi### [at] hotmailcom> wrote in message
news:3dd0bae5@news.povray.org...
: > This is a still I was working on for the IRTC back
: > in March 2001, but I got too busy with other things.
: > I started working on it again in the last couple of
: > weeks, I'd sure appreciate any comments or
: > suggestions.
:
: Nice scene. I especially like the bricks what are they isos? CSG?

Thanks. CSG.

: The only
: suggestion I have is change the tree at the top of the picture, it's very
: hard to see the trunk so it kinda looks like its floating in the air, either
: reposition it, change the colour of the bark, or light it differently so the
: trunk becomes more visible.

I will try it out. Thanks for the suggestion.
=Bob=


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From: =Bob=
Subject: Re: Fortress-Old stuff, revisted (311k before upload)
Date: 12 Nov 2002 14:06:41
Message: <3dd15141@news.povray.org>
"JPGargoyle" <jpg### [at] sapopt> wrote in message
news:web.3dd0f19047945e90641f1e9f0@news.povray.org...
: =Bob= wrote:
: >This is a still I was working on for the IRTC back
: >in March 2001, but I got too busy with other things.
: >I started working on it again in the last couple of
: >weeks, I'd sure appreciate any comments or
: >suggestions.
:
: Nice pic.
: But I think there are some proportions that aren't right.
: The pump looks too small in relation to the bricks.
: My suggestion would be to use more bricks to make the well so that their
: size is smaller.
: Best regards.

Thanks JP. I'll review the proportions and try to
get it balanced. Thanks for your help.
Have a great day!
=Bob=


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From: Ive
Subject: Re: Fortress-Old stuff, revisted (311k before upload)
Date: 14 Nov 2002 14:07:50
Message: <3dd3f486$1@news.povray.org>
Nice, indeed. The well looks already very good. I guess
you are using a sky_sphere for the clouds. Maybe you
should consider a plane for the cloud texture (or the
stackered sky technique) so you will get a more realistic
appearance of the clouds above the fence.

-Ive


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From: =Bob=
Subject: Re: Fortress-Old stuff, revisted (311k before upload)
Date: 15 Nov 2002 11:13:29
Message: <3dd51d29$1@news.povray.org>
"Ive" <ive### [at] lilysoftcom> wrote in message news:3dd3f486$1@news.povray.org...
: Nice, indeed. The well looks already very good. I guess
: you are using a sky_sphere for the clouds. Maybe you
: should consider a plane for the cloud texture (or the
: stackered sky technique) so you will get a more realistic
: appearance of the clouds above the fence.
:
: -Ive
:

Thanks Ive. Yep, it's a sky_sphere. I'll try your suggestions.
Have a great day!
=Bob=


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