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From: jimbobjim
Subject: starfish WIP (68k)
Date: 8 Apr 2002 20:27:28
Message: <3cb23570@news.povray.org>
Hi all

just a post of my current project - ideas/comments on expanding the scene
would be appreciated.
I thought maybe another small sea creature (shrimp or crab etc) in the top
right would help balance the image out a little.
- are the textures, lighting ok?

thanks
jim


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From: Shay
Subject: Re: starfish WIP (68k)
Date: 8 Apr 2002 21:07:11
Message: <3cb23ebf$1@news.povray.org>
Very,very nice picture. I think any additions to the scene should be in the
water, but not on the rock. Fish are a possibility. Another would be a rusty
structure which has fallen into the water or is supporting something above
it.

 -Shay

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From: Lutz-Peter Hooge
Subject: Re: starfish WIP (68k)
Date: 8 Apr 2002 21:28:52
Message: <MPG.171c621bb589ffa29896f7@news.povray.org>
In article <3cb23570@news.povray.org>, jim### [at] blueyondercouk says...

> just a post of my current project - ideas/comments on expanding the scene
> would be appreciated.
> I thought maybe another small sea creature (shrimp or crab etc) in the top
> right would help balance the image out a little.
> - are the textures, lighting ok?

I think the texture is not really convincing. It looks more like stone or 
clay, not like a living creature.

Lutz-Peter


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From: Sir Charles W  Shults III
Subject: Re: starfish WIP (68k)
Date: 8 Apr 2002 22:33:21
Message: <3cb252f1$1@news.povray.org>
I don't know- I have seen a lot of marine creatures, and maybe just a tweak
of the surface characteristics would do it.  It looks like a great surface-
bumpy and irregular enough; the size and scale both look good.  I am not sure
what I would change to make it better.  Maybe a slightly more "granular" look?
But not much.

Cheers!

Chip Shults
My robotics, space and CGI web page - http://home.cfl.rr.com/aichip

light_source{0#macro k(_)sphere{13*z+i*_.5pigment{agate}finish{phong.3}}#end
1}#macro _(s,i,g)#if(s)k(1)k(-1)_(s-1i+g,g)#end#end _(3x+3*y<2,-2>)_(2x,y)_(
2x-y,x)_(4x*3,-y)_(4<3,1>x)_(2x*6,-y)


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From: Corey Woodworth
Subject: Re: starfish WIP (68k)
Date: 9 Apr 2002 00:41:39
Message: <3cb27103$1@news.povray.org>
"Shay" <shi### [at] houstonrrcom> wrote in message
news:3cb23ebf$1@news.povray.org...
> Very,very nice picture. I think any additions to the scene should be in
the
> water, but not on the rock. Fish are a possibility. Another would be a
rusty
> structure which has fallen into the water or is supporting something above
> it.

I like the fish in the forground idea, especially if you added a focul blur
focused on the star fish.

Corey


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From: KalleK
Subject: Re: starfish WIP - photo 20KB
Date: 9 Apr 2002 02:39:52
Message: <3cb28cb8@news.povray.org>
jimbobjim <jim### [at] blueyondercouk> schrieb in im Newsbeitrag:
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> Hi all
>
> just a post of my current project - ideas/comments on expanding the scene
> would be appreciated.
> I thought maybe another small sea creature (shrimp or crab etc) in the top
> right would help balance the image out a little.
> - are the textures, lighting ok?

Hi Jimbojim!

This reminds me of a background-picture I once had. But now, I'm missing the
caustics you have there... :-)
As others said, I think a bit of focalblur would do your scene very good.
Maybe you can add a shell. (you know, those of the startup-picture of good
ol' Pov 3.1)

cukk


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From: Hugo
Subject: Re: starfish WIP (68k)
Date: 9 Apr 2002 03:42:47
Message: <3cb29b77$1@news.povray.org>
It looks very well !
I suppose this is under the water ... but it's not blue at all?

Regards,
Hugo


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From: jimbobjim
Subject: Re: starfish WIP (68k)
Date: 9 Apr 2002 12:08:23
Message: <3cb311f7@news.povray.org>
"Shay" <shi### [at] houstonrrcom> wrote in message
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> Very,very nice picture.

Thanks Shay

>I think any additions to the scene should be in the
> water, but not on the rock. Fish are a possibility. Another would be a
rusty
> structure which has fallen into the water or is supporting something above
> it.

maybe a rusty tin can?

I thought about it today and wondered whether some floaty bits of stuff in
the sea would help - I've never really used (scattering) media, so would
this be a good way to produce the effect or would actual objects be better
to achieve this?

"Sir Charles W. Shults III" <aic### [at] cflrrcom> wrote in message
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>     I don't know- I have seen a lot of marine creatures, and maybe just a
tweak
> of the surface characteristics would do it.  It looks like a great
surface-
> bumpy and irregular enough; the size and scale both look good.  I am not
sure
> what I would change to make it better.  Maybe a slightly more "granular"
look?
> But not much.
>

the texture is a bit shameful really:
texture {
    pigment {Tan}
    normal {crackle 2 turbulence 0.1 ramp_wave}
    scale 0.01
}

and at this stage is only intended as a building block to achieve erm...
'greater things'

thanks
jim


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