Thomas de Groot <tho### [at] degrootorg> wrote:

Thomas,

very nice image.

Yet still a little thing you could try to bring a bit more tension, dynamics, in
the composition. Put your hand over the left side of the image, a bit left of
the phallic symbol in the hills. It makes the point of attention, the person,
move to the left too. That way you get a "line of sight", or eye movement from
left to right. A centric composition in such a wide landscape is more static.

cheers,

ingo


> Hi all,
>
> Some months have passed since my last activity here, so it is time I
> guess to submit my latest to your critical appraisement.
>
> Essentially, it is a study of the 2010 Textured Fog macro by Sam Benge,
> complemented by And's Ideal Area Light include, also from 2010 iirc.
>
> --
> Thomas

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