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Am 10.09.2018 um 12:38 schrieb Stephen:
> On 09/09/2018 21:30, MichaelJF wrote:
>> Hi to the crowd,
>>
>> as Windows 10 delivers us with unwanted images, most of them very nice
>> but only placed to gain information about the preferences of the
>> users, I was inspired by one of them, titeled "Wooden Footpath in
>> Dense Jungle"
>> (https://spotlight.it-notes.ru/images/007ba85b9d0702c81be02247e0143179).
>>
>> So I came up with the following idea, having had an old song by Bob
>> Marley in mind. It is still a WIP at the moment (some textures have to
>> be replaced and I think about some better trees in the foreground
>> having roots and being covered with ivy). But as a first impression
>> this one can serve.
>>
>> Suggestions are very welcome.
>>
>> Best regards
>> Michael
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>
> Hi Michael, I really like this.
> The composition is good and the contrast of the red dress with the
> general lightness is effective. I like the sky, it is under stated and
> goes well with the texture of the vegetation.
> The wooden footpath bothers me, though. Too high and thick. The texture
> shows a pattern looking into the depth.
> But it looks like a future desktop wallpaper. :)
>
Thank you Stephen, and yes the footpath needs some more work. Most
likely I will give Chris Hormann's isowood a try again. Looking at the
image after some days now, I think one more detailed tree to the right
should suffice to preserve the open area in the foreground. And I will
try to modify the concrete texture at the stems to gain a more bark like
structure. The only thing I'm not sure about at the moment, is to put
some kind of structure at the end of the footpath (two towers, menhirs
or something like that).
Best regards
Michael
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